ApolloMix

Hey, this is a pretty good sheet! I only see a couple things that should be changed. Fix them, and I'll star this!

First off: I think the key signature should have one sharp, though I'm not 100% on that one. One sharp is the key equivalent of G major, which I think this song is in. The B-flats just grunge the song up, but don't fit in the key. So... one sharp, despite the accidentals, I say, but you should probably get some advice from other people on that one.

Next, the little glissando right before the actual song. You should get rid of the 8th rest before it, and then draw the squiggly glissando line all the way down to the bottom G of the bass clef. That's how far it spans, I believe.

Lastly, ever sheet should end with an ending, section bar. You just have a single line. It should be thicker.

Good luck!

..Ah stupid program didn't realise when i saved it as a .pdf it got rid of the repeats, but when i use pdf995 to save as .pdf the writing go's big... ill fix it up as soon as i can and add the other stuff.:-)

i fixed it up but i didn't change the key cause for some reason it got rid of the repeat on the bass clef. ???

Try adding an actual glissando, not that craziness you have there. What program are you using to make this?

Musescore 0.9.5 i cant figure out how to add a glissando over the 2 clefs/ tracks i try again later.

sounds good. the melody should be 2 note chords. The repeat is a little off with the bass note too.

otherwise, looks very good.

I've added a glissando over one line.