ApolloMix

Ugg the Coda was such a nightmare but I did the best I could...

This sounds pretty good. The coda is a bit sloppy visually, so you should probably fix that up. Also, the notes / chord on measure 24 sound wrong, so you should probably fix that up.

Also, I don't think the part at the end is in D, judging by all of the accidentals. I didn't thoroughly analyze it, but I'm pretty sure it changes. See if you can find a common chord; I'm too tired to play with it right now, haha.

this one is close, but i feel its a little off. Just with the rhythm and some chords sound off. (like only a couple) Also, i would just tidy it up a bit. The Coda signs are all over the place and clash with notes in some places.

Deku: Yeah I agree there is a key change at the end. What do you think of it now? Hard to tell which key to put it in...

Grimace: Fixed the Coda ugly spot. I think the rhythms and chords are good although I'm not completely sure on the last 7 measures or so. Any ideas?

The chord on measure 24 sounds wrong. Make the the top not on the bass staff an A, not an F.

Also, on measures 55-56, that long tie is not necessary. Looks bad, and isn't exactly playable either.

You have some squishage at the 57th-58th measures too. Just reenter one of the notes, and it should stretch back out.

As for the key signature at the end, I'm not sure, but the first chord IS Bb minor, so you are probably right. Fix what I said, and I think we can star this one.

Fixed two of the three, but I think if you listen to this you will hear at 0:31 that A is not part of the chord.

http://www.youtube.com/user/SilvaGunner#p/c/9307639830A7F5A1/0/mLmu9iyYsc8